Sunday, May 1, 2016

Slaugherhouse Part I

Hey, to anyone who follows my blog! I haven't posted in a while... but I've been working on something for the last week, a written story that I thought was a bit too complex for a comic. I'm not the BEST writer... but I did include illustrations for the most important scenes.

The link below will take you to the dropbox folder containing Slaughterhouse, Part I: 

7 comments:

  1. God, that was some kinda fuckin' hot, Ashe. You are one hell of a writer, dude! I can't wait to read more....and more....and more. Of course, the illustrations really add to it a lot, but I love the way you tell your story. I could just picture Corbin with that first kill, and I am definitely Corbin. Haha. As I've said before, I've been known to poke a guy in his navel and growl, "bang", so that part really resonated with me. Loved it! This was well worth the wait, Ashe. Thanks for sharing this with us. You missed your calling. Maybe someday you can write us a western, too.

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    1. Thanks a lot, Dino! Haha, I knew you'd empathize a lot with Corbin and his 'motivations,' hehe. The finger-plugging 'bang' scene was actually inspired by what you told me! I hope you'll like part 2... There's definitely more kills to come!

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    2. No, thank YOU, Ashe! Unlike Corbin, I would never have had the nerve to poke a stranger in his navel like that, but a guy I knew for a long time?.....yeah, been there, done that. That said, I would have definitely had the urge. And, if our TVs where I was working were showing old westerns, I would have had a big problem doing my job all day, just like Corbin did. We can't blame Corbin for what happened....he was just an innocent man surrounded by big sexy bellies that required some lead in 'em. Haha. Loved the drawing of the cop...fuckin' hot dude in that skin-tight shirt! Poor Corbin. Hehe.

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    3. Hehe, thanks! I used references for Scott's character, but Matt and the Officer were cooked up in my imagination! I love the idea of a hulking, muscular cop not afraid to show off his physique... cocky about it, even... but he still has a bit of a belly to make him vulnerable! And poor Corbin, indeed... was only trying to do his job, and next thing he knows there are fat-bellied guys everywhere, and his dick tells him he has no choice but to kill 'em in their big, sexy guts! Don't know how he's gonna get out of this one, haha!

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  2. What a great story? Thanks for drawing those men killed in their tight garment especially the cop. I will never feel bored visiting your blog.

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  3. And you say you aren't much of a writer Ashe ;)

    You pick hot thoughts and scenes right out of my own head it seems and then proceed to go exactly where I'd go with them THUT THUT THUT bullets puncturing bellies, ball gut punching, massive bulges revealed and thick shafts stroked after the victim goes down - it's all SO familiar that it seems you're already in my head and in my pants -- and I'm OK with that - after all who couldn't use a little assistance now and then.....looking forward to part III ;)

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